IELTS writing task 1 line graph sample #2

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The graph above compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

  • You should write at least 150 words.

IELTS writing task 1 line graph sample #2

Sample Answer:
The line graph shows the amount of users of two different music sites namely, Music choice and Pop parade within two weeks. It is clear that both music sites experienced a significant increase in terms of their number of visitors towards the end of the period. It is also noticeable that more people used Music Choice than Pop parade throughout most of the period.

Turning to details, the number of listeners visited Music choice was 120 thousand on the first day and was almost thrice than the visitors by Pop parade which was only 40 thousand on the same day. From first day onwards, the number of visits started to fell noticeably from 120 thousand in Music choice, except Pop Parade which had a slight decline.

By comparison, the number of people visited Music Choice was 120000, compared to Pop Parade which was used by 60000 people on the third day shown. There was a slight fluctuation in the number of visitors to Pop Parade between 20000 and 40000 from on the day 4 till 11, in comparison, having increased from 40k to 140k, the figure for Music choice in 2 days. The visitors of Pop Parade decreased steadily from 120k till nearly 118k in two days and then recovered at that rate, whereas visits of Music Choice peaked at 14th day.

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